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Script Feedback from Working Screenwriting Coaches
NOT SURE IF YOUR SCRIPT IS WORKING?
Whether you’re rewriting, polishing for submission, or stuck after confusing feedback, our Development Notes give you clear, actionable guidance from experts who know what execs and judges are looking for.
Get a real plan for a stronger script.
“The Professional Pen is by FAR one of the BEST script consulting services available to writers at every level. They are so highly skilled and knowledgeable about story and script development, and bring their passion and intuition to the table. What they have simply can't be taught. I'm so grateful to have come across their work as they have helped me elevate my screenplays for producers. I won't make a move without TPP's services. Yes. They're THAT good.”
- Craig R. (Showrunner) and Caryn W.R. (Actress + Producer)
what are development notes?
Development Notes is our signature service, and here’s why:
Someone lied to you about needing script coverage, and TPP is on a mission to correct that mistake.
Script coverage and development notes are not the same thing —and knowing the difference could save your career. Read this before you spend another dollar→
Coverage is for executives. Development Notes, on the other hand, are for writers. They’re part of the second phase of the studio system—after the script is written but before the greenlight—where writers receive detailed notes and are expected to revise quickly, collaborate well, and deliver under pressure.
This process teaches two of the most essential skills you need to make it as a professional screenwriter:
HOW TO RECEIVE
SCRIPT NOTES
HOW TO ADDRESS
SCRIPT NOTES
That’s where we come in.
At The Professional Pen, our Development Notes go beyond surface-level feedback.
We help you understand exactly why your screenplay isn’t working and how to fix it—with clear, actionable next steps.
You’ll be paired with your own dedicated screenwriting coach - we call them Story Experts - who stays with you from draft to draft, so you’re not getting new eyes (and new opinions) every time. That consistency gives you a clear development path and support tailored to your specific screenwriting goals and challenges.
This isn’t just script feedback.
It’s training for a real screenwriting career in Hollywood.
MEET YOUR SCREENWRITING COACHES
Submit your script for development notes
Select your script format:
SHORTS
For short scripts up to 20 pages
→ $4/page for each additional page
Includes detailed page notes on:
• Story
• Structure
• Character
• Areas of Confusion
Plus:
1/2-Hour Consultation to discuss notes, clarify questions, and assess production readiness
Final Recommendation:
Pass / Needs Development / Consider
$129
1/2hr TV
For pilot scripts up to
30 pages
→ $4/page for each additional page
Includes extensive page notes on:
• Story
• Structure
• Character
• Areas of Confusion
• Proofreading & Formatting
Plus: Overall summary of areas of development + Next Steps
Final Recommendation:
Pass / Needs Development / Consider
Upgrades Available:
• Logline Review
• 1-Hour Notes Call
• Rewrite Package
*Discount available on future drafts
$139
1hr TV
For pilot scripts up to
60 pages
→ $4/page for each additional page
Includes extensive page notes on:
• Story
• Structure
• Character
• Areas of Confusion
• Proofreading & Formatting
Plus: Overall summary of areas of development + Next Steps
Final Recommendation:
Pass / Needs Development / Consider
Upgrades Available:
• Logline Review
• Story Jam
• Rewrite Package
*Discount available on future drafts
$259
FEATURES
For feature scripts up to 120 pages
→ $4/page for each additional page
Includes extensive page notes on:
• Story
• Structure
• Character
• Areas of Confusion
• Proofreading & Formatting
Plus: Overall summary of areas of development + Next Steps
Final Recommendation:
Pass / Needs Development / Consider
Upgrades Available:
• Logline Review
• Story Jam
• Rewrite Package
*Discount available on future drafts
$379
you’ve got questions.
we’ve got answers.
Browse our FAQs — or chat 1:1 with a Story Expert to get your questions answered.
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The Development Notes Service for Feature screenplays and TV scripts includes:
Turnaround Time: 2 Weeks
Extensive Page Notes, including but not limited to:
Structure
Character
Story
Formatting
Areas of confusion
Suggested revisions
Recommendation: Pass/Needs Development/Consider
Option to Add-On a Logline Review
Option to Add-On a Story Jam to answer any clarifying questions
Option to work 1:1 with your personal Story Expert through a Rewrite Package
Submit your Feature for Development Notes here.
Submit your 1/2hr TV script or Development Notes here.
Submit your 1hr TV script or Development Notes here.
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Writing a short film script?
Let’s make sure it’s ready for production.Shorts are calling cards — and you want yours to stand out. In this 1:1 session, a Story Expert will walk through your script with you, offer clear feedback, and help you assess whether it’s ready to shoot or still needs a polish. It’s not just about the story — it’s about being production-ready.
Feedback on your Short includes:
Detailed story notes
A 1hr Consultation to discuss story and production
Submit your Short here.
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For Features and TV Scripts:
Select the correct format in the pricing table.
Purchase the service via the checkout page.
Pen Pals have the option to Add-On a Logline Review and a Notes Call.
After payment, Pen Pals will be directed to submit their script.
If a Logline Review was purchased, add your Logline in the dedicated form field for review.
If a Notes Call was purchased, Pen Pals will receive a link to schedule the call when the notes are returned via email from your personal Story Expert.
For Shorts:
Select Shorts in the pricing table.
Schedule your call.
Upon submitting payment, Pen Pals will be directed to submit their script.
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Script recommendations are evaluations that help writers understand the level of development their script requires
to meet industry standards and enhance its overall quality.PASS: The story is either unclear, has weak structure, needs more complex character work or is lacking proofreading and industry-standard formatting.
NEEDS DEVELOPMENT: The screenplay is working in most areas but not executing at its highest potential. The script will be in great shape if the writer addresses the action items disclosed in the feedback.
CONSIDER: The story is clear, the structure is strong, the characters are 3-dimensional, and the proofreading and formatting is professional and up to industry standard.
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Need help applying your notes?
You can upgrade to a Rewrite Package—six weeks of 1:1, two-hour sessions with your Story Expert to implement the notes and elevate your draft into a portfolio-ready script.Rewrite Packages are available on a case-by-case basis, depending on availability.
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The Story Notes service is designed for Pen Pals who have revised their script based on Development Notes from their assigned Story Expert. Your Story Expert will monitor and guide your progress, ensuring your script is polished and refined.
The Story Notes service includes:Detailed, page-by-page Story Notes
Overall summary of your areas of development and next steps
The Story Notes service does not include:Proofreading + Formatting Notes
Logline Review
Finished your revised draft? Submit for Story Notes here.
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Story Experts are assigned unless specifically requested. You'll continue working with the same Story Expert on future services to ensure consistency and track your progress from draft to draft. This helps avoid conflicting feedback and provides a more focused path toward a polished script.
If a new Story Expert is ever assigned, they’ll review the original feedback to stay aligned with your journey—but they will not read your original submission. If you prefer to start fresh with a new Story Expert, you can resubmit your script as a new project by selecting the appropriate format from the pricing table.
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No worries. We’ve got you at every step in your screenwriting journey.
If you find yourself needing additional support addressing your notes, you can work 1: 1 with your personal Story Expert through a Rewrite Package. The package includes 6 weeks of 2-hour sessions designed to refine your script into a polished sample ready for your professional writing portfolio.
Rewrite packages are available on a case-by-case basis and at Story Expert availability.
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If your script is longer than the standard page count, please Add-On the number additional pages during checkout at $4/page. Increase the quantity by the number of additional pages.
Standard Page Counts:
Shorts (20 pages)
1/2hr TV (30 pages)
1hr TV ( 60 pages)
Feature (75-120 pages)
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yOU’RE ONE STEP CLOSER TO BEING A WORKING WRITER - let’s GET YOU THERE,
Development Notes simulate the exact feedback pro writers get from studio execs.
If you’re serious about screenwriting, this is your next move.